A descent into the deranged mind of Nero as he fights his own will against himself. Love and pain of loss confuse him into something he couldn't have dreamt of becoming.
I've recently tweaked all the current chapters. Just technical changes mainly paragraph related :) Take a look and let me know what you think :) Thanks
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Although the imagery is magnificent, the sentences tend to be worded in such a way that they don't necessarily flow as smoothly as they could. A simpler word or phrase in many of the chapters would allow it to blend better.
Is it inspired by the Roman ruler Nero? What a psycho he was...tehee...
This is really good. I hate it when works are choppy and your words read easily so thats awesome. I like your descriptions and I will have to read more of it when you get the time. You should try sending this into a publisher. Definitely 100/100. Great job and always keep writing. :)
Thank you :) And no it's not based not Nero the roman. hehe Completely fictional :D Thank you once m.. read moreThank you :) And no it's not based not Nero the roman. hehe Completely fictional :D Thank you once more
12 Years Ago
Welcome :)
12 Years Ago
And I suppose you meant you'll read more when you get the time ? :) hehe
okay that makes more sense cause the Nero in Roman history would never act like that. good job so fa.. read moreokay that makes more sense cause the Nero in Roman history would never act like that. good job so far. i'll be back soon to read more but i am writing something right now. :)
12 Years Ago
If you are into the story at all, then you;ll be glad to know that I'll be publishing the rest of wh.. read moreIf you are into the story at all, then you;ll be glad to know that I'll be publishing the rest of what I have saved today :)
I suffer from a multiple personality disorder. It had been a major setback most of my younger life but Ive found that I enjoy collaborating my writing with my other me´s. Ive been told its actua.. more..