Nero's Decay

A Book by Thomas Reilly Thornhill

A descent into the deranged mind of Nero as he fights his own will against himself. Love and pain of loss confuse him into something he couldn't have dreamt of becoming.

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© 2012 Thomas Reilly Thornhill

Author's Note

I've recently tweaked all the current chapters. Just technical changes mainly paragraph related :) Take a look and let me know what you think :) Thanks

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Knight in Armor

Although the imagery is magnificent, the sentences tend to be worded in such a way that they don't necessarily flow as smoothly as they could. A simpler word or phrase in many of the chapters would allow it to blend better.

Posted 12 Years Ago

12 Years Ago

Thank you for taking the time to read this :)

astronaut

Is it inspired by the Roman ruler Nero? What a psycho he was...tehee...
This is really good. I hate it when works are choppy and your words read easily so thats awesome. I like your descriptions and I will have to read more of it when you get the time. You should try sending this into a publisher. Definitely 100/100. Great job and always keep writing. :)

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12 Years Ago

Thank you :) And no it's not based not Nero the roman. hehe Completely fictional :D Thank you once m.. read more

12 Years Ago

Welcome :)

12 Years Ago

And I suppose you meant you'll read more when you get the time ? :) hehe

Chloe

No words can describe how awesome this book is

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Posted 12 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

12 Years Ago

Thank you so much. It's still in progress so there is far more to come :)

PokemonFan#1

My friend and I do a few stories, along with some writers on here too! Can't wait to read!

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Posted 12 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

12 Years Ago

Thank you :) I hope you enjoy it

Rhea752

Nero, as in the Roman emperor?

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Posted 12 Years Ago

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12 Years Ago

okay that makes more sense cause the Nero in Roman history would never act like that. good job so fa.. read more

12 Years Ago

If you are into the story at all, then you;ll be glad to know that I'll be publishing the rest of wh.. read more

12 Years Ago

:o can't wait!!!

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Shelved in 8 Libraries

Added on July 21, 2012
Last Updated on July 23, 2012
Tags: love, death, pain, insanity, murder

Author

Thomas Reilly Thornhill

Glasgow, strathclyde, United Kingdom

About

I suffer from a multiple personality disorder. It had been a major setback most of my younger life but Ive found that I enjoy collaborating my writing with my other me´s. Ive been told its actua.. more..