Blue Eyes

 

Behind these blue eyes , what do you see?

Can you see my soul?

or how i feel about you?

do my eyes tell you about my whole life?

or do they give you more questions that are without answers

Behind these blue eyes

I hope you see me, who i truely am,

the chaotic soul i can be

the crazy person that is called Kira.

Behind these blue eyes you will see poison

for that is what i am poison

to all who love me

maybe you can save me

from this curse of death placed upon my soul,

because if you love me, you may die

because through these blue eyes,

i never see the people i love alive.

 

Reviews

[boldartist]

This poem is cool because it talks about the poet's eyes and what those eye see.Rather then the lovers eyes which most poems are about,this makes more since because poetry is about your view.Thanks for writing,boldartist

[Stacy]

I found this to be interesting. I did like the structure.

[Lea Jane]

A very tragic ending, but a beautiful poem nonetheless. I myself have blue eyes, and I loved the way you wrote this. Good flow, great work!


--Leia