Never leave

 

He lost his father,

he lost his mother,

and all he has left is me

I plan to never leave!

He didn't need his father,

he didn't need his mother

but he needs me

and i will never leave

he prays in the morning

he prays at night

he even prays by candlelight

then one day he screams

and i yell "oh man this is hell"

i tried to tell him

i would never leave

but it was something he just wouldnt believe

He lost his father

He lost his mother

and now he has lost me

So mush for i'll never leave.

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Good poem. There is one word spelled wrong but I thought the poem had a nice flow. I like the line structure. It seemed to fit the poem.