~Missing You~

A poem from the archives

 I hear your voice

in the night,

your words abound

with Passion's light;

serenading

sweet fantasy

fill my soul

with ecstasy.



I see your face

in a trance

alluring eyes,

a second glance...

tender lips

touch my skin

I forget

the dream I'm in...



I long

to feel

your touch...

Reviews

[Kelley Pascoe]

cool poem Kira! very romantic....thanks for sharing.
Kelley Frost

[Fantasyfairy]

Beautiful poem, full of dreams and love, very sensual and loving. If only the real world could be this beautiful, that is the beauty of dreams. Very well written, lovely flow, it rolls off the tongue so perfectly. XX

[Orlando Murcia]

This was a very well descrption of the fantazies you probaly had about that person, Very well done, and I hope you grasp your fantasy in reality. Orlando

[Leah Simone]

some dreams taste so real you find yourself licking your lips for more - I think some words have the same effect - this speaks of such fantasy - well done.

[Antony]

Hi sweet lady, welcome back, nice to hear your words again, I don't remember this one, but it has all those fantasy and subtle romantic touches to it, you have always been one of the best at rhyming with an excellent flow.
Tony

[Dempsey Wilson (D.L. Wi..]

Wow, Kira! Very nicely done! Powerful without overdoing it. This is one of those poems that gives me goosebumps. There's talent there, I think! Good job. I look forward to reading more of your work!

[WordMaster]

What a well crafted poem, full of feeling and emotion

Your word selection is just grand and you conveyed your feelings with just the
right amount of words

Well done