~Missing You~

A poem from the archives

 I hear your voice

in the night,

your words abound

with Passion's light;

serenading

sweet fantasy

fill my soul

with ecstasy.



I see your face

in a trance

alluring eyes,

a second glance...

tender lips

touch my skin

I forget

the dream I'm in...



I long

to feel

your touch...

Reviews

[The Silver Tongued Devi..]

I Just Joined and Posted Two Poems. My Wife Passed Away in April and I get Relief Writing Erotica Apoyt Our Personal Experiences. Your Poem Missing You Is Exactly How I Feel.

[Stanley R. Teater]

I'm no expert in poetry. I haven't tried writing it in many years. But I know what I like. And I like "Missing You".

[EdgarLovecraft]

Well structured, good rhymes and good imagery

[Kaitlyn Boehm]

beautiful

[Abdul Batin Osman Bey]

very nice write, it's sexy

[M Garcia]

Excellent write. I cannot wait to read more of your work.

[*** Hey Jude***]

This stanza stands out,
"dreaming of him, and when I wake he's not there," he chooses not to,"
I guess the free will thing, it can suck.

Llove hurts when it is not reciprocated in the ways we thought they would be. Hope your smilereturns soon with the warmth of what the holiday's reprosent! Nice work, blessings ~ Judi :-)

[Anonymous]

great...wish i could feel it right now...hee hee...keep it up

[1809 Black Plague Decem..]

this is how I feel right now,
dreaming of him, and when I wake he's not there,
:( great peom, mishel

[Laura E. Aranda]

Can't we all at one time or another relate to the midnight aching love and loneliness? This was fun and very easy to read
I like the font color u used as well
Please come read my featured poem when you can
Thanks
cheers, lea