broken

I hate to remember
Bt just can't hold it back
Every detail.. yes I do
With the words.. unspoken and spoken
Every move, every breath, every touch
I have been broken.. No torn.. Yes ripped
Can't even tell ,
Am I dust, shreds or pieces
The pain though, I can tell
Emanates from deep..
With every throb it aches
Like a fire it was beautiful, with the warmth
Now it's hot, it burns, it has consumed
The lump in my throat..
Makes me choke with every breath
Am not lying, you won't know
Till you've loved and have lost
Maybe it's me ,
Am I just paranoid? I don't know
But a word to the heart
To the tender and unbroken
If you "fall for" don't jump
Strap in and go slow
Down there its tough, it's concrete
Ain't no paradise ..
Take my word and watch out
It's messy down here

Reviews

[Najam Us Saher]

I can understand about the pain you've mentioned here. Mind really stops working when heart is drowned in sadness. We find no accurate word to express ourselves. Well written. Loved it.