It all started with a comforting

Love Wins

There was once a little boy Alex , he was a good student working hard to impress his parents always getting good grades so that his parents would be proud of him but there was always something lacking in him he never knew what it was. His parents offered to help , they tried to get him into clubs of entertainment , tried playing sports , playing the guitar but it was never enough to make him happy . He went to high school when it all started he met this girl named Cassie , a beautiful girl ! They first met in the restaurant near the school ! she said '' I like your shirt ! '' and then it all started !they went to the cinema together watched their best movies and shared their secrets and thoughts ! Alex was starting to like her but there was always something missing in him which he could never know even though Cassie always made him happy and joyful ! he is so grateful to her and he always tries to make her happy as much as she made him ! These two became just like soulmates , doing everything together and they slowly they got rid of their loneliness ! Once Alex was on his way to Cassie's house but he saw a boy trying to cut ! '' You know that won't make you feel any better.'' Says Alex " Go away ! you won't make me feel any better either ..''Says the boy Alex apporoaches to the boy , sits with him and says " I can actuallly . Because i've been there before ,i once tried cutting and it never helped it just made me feel worse , but you know what did? Music did ! It healed me from all the sadness i was drown into so put down that knife and let me show you something '' Alex puts the earphones into the boy's ears and make him listen to a calm piano sound and there it goes . . .

The boy was starting to calm himself and then he said '' My name is Paul"

Alex added : And i'm Alex ! Hope that helped you a little

-It actually helped alot .. it's like magic all the bad thoughts r gone . says Paul while waking up and leaving with a smile .

 

Author's Note

It's still unfinished yet

Reviews

[Davina]

Hi Kinza,
Sorry it's been a while. I think you've addressed some very sad and rarely spoken about subject matter in your story. Well done for giving it a voice! Very brave of you I think and a powerful message contained within.
xx

[Hedi]

Well it seems to be nice work. I like the conflict that is created. But It was better if you gave more details so that we can live his anxiety. Otherwise, I liked the story and I hope you finish it soon