Bottleneck Slide (The Blues Singer)

Bottleneck Slide (The Blues Singer)

A Poem by Alex Vidmar

He strums the blues,
His chords alive, yet sad.
He strums the blues.
His sounds alive, yet sad.
He plays the blues,
His Bottleneck Slide makes it so sad.

He's pickin' the blues,
Bottleneck Slide on his finger.
He's pickin' the blues,
Bottleneck Slide on his finger.
His guitar sings the blues,
Bottleneck Slide making notes ring.

He sings the blues,
His songs alive yet sad.
He sings the blues,
His songs alive but sad.
He sings the blues,
Bottleneck Slide sounds true.

© 2012 Alex Vidmar


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Alex Vidmar
Just a little blues song I thought up in about five minutes.

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I can see this as a blues song. I like the repetition you have going on. Nice job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

good poem, i like it

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Alex Vidmar
Alex Vidmar

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