Tease

Tease

A Poem by Alex Vidmar

You, are a tease.
You are a flirt,
And you've destroyed me...
destroyed me inside...

Everything...
Means....
Insignificant...
Like...
Years gone by.

Really...
Everything is nothing...
Nothing...
Equals...
Exponential...

Weary of this
Excessive
And
Very
Evil
Relationship...

© 2012 Alex Vidmar


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I like this. I like the last stanza. I like the emotions that come across.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love this ..been there myself for years

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I do understand the hurt these relationships can cause. It's hard to let go but yet you know you should. Always be weary of the tease.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I think this poem would flow better without the overuse of ellipses (...) Too much pause and deep breath for a hurt, annoyed poem

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I enjoyed this write

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I read what you did with the last three stanzas...what did she do?

Posted 12 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Pax
hmm...a tease..nice write.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Intense and powerful, great write.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow, intense, seriously.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Alex Vidmar
Alex Vidmar

Wakefield, RI



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