Tease

You, are a tease.
You are a flirt,
And you've destroyed me...
destroyed me inside...

Everything...
Means....
Insignificant...
Like...
Years gone by.

Really...
Everything is nothing...
Nothing...
Equals...
Exponential...

Weary of this
Excessive
And
Very
Evil
Relationship...

Reviews

[RachelReaper]

Everyone hates a tease...

[Beck Louise]

oh my goodness, I can so relate! amazing!!

[Owlgirl]

WOW! Great emotion, lovely poem, amazing format!!!

[♪The Girl Next Do..]

So truthful, has a haunting feeling to it. Great work!

[V.J.C.]

Yes this is raw emotion that is shown through the word you use.. I like this poem and it has a relating quality to it that draws the reader, thanks for the read....

[Fragilebrokendreams]

Completely raw, sharper than a blade cutting through skin and bone and nicely written.

[Mockingbird]

shows raw emotion. there is redemption in the end when it can be inferred that the person is leaving this oppressive relationship.

[Sky]

Well said. Straight and to the point, slightly serrated with a twist of contempt. Ah, the power of poetry!

[♥ Kinnixk]

I love this...reminds me of my past relationship. Very nice :)

[K-mo]

this poem really makes you think, very good and well written