Stairway
A Chapter by
Alex Vidmar
Inspired by Led Zeppelin's "Stairway to Heaven"
Each time it takes over,
I find myself one step higher.
Climbing that stairway,
That Stairway into Heaven.
No matter how much
I try to fight,
I'm pulled up higher,
Destined for endless flight.
Upon the whispering wind,
Are carried truth and sin.
These two words have a very fine line between
Because you know, words have two meanings.
Each time it takes over,
I find myself one step higher.
Climbing that stairway,
That Stairway into Heaven.
Each time it takes over,
I climb one step higher.
Climbing that stairway,
Up to Heaven.
© 2012 Alex Vidmar
Featured Review
Inspirational poetry from a beautiful song, I loved the flow, and the pleasant, uplifting feelings. I particularly enjoyed the last two stanzas, because they were unique, the way you made them sound similar, and yet so different. Flawless write, enjoyed reading.
Posted 12 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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very well penned poem.
Posted 12 Years Ago
very well penned poem.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Each time it takes over,
I find myself one step higher.
Climbing that stairway,
That Stairway into Heaven.
I love how that's repeated :) Good poem
Posted 12 Years Ago
Each time it takes over,
I find myself one step higher.
Climbing that stairway,
That Stairway into Heaven.
I love how that's repeated :) Good poem
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Third stanza is masterful in its dark and light allusions. Loved it.
Posted 12 Years Ago
Third stanza is masterful in its dark and light allusions. Loved it.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Lovely write to a beautiful song , yes words has two meanings.
Posted 12 Years Ago
Lovely write to a beautiful song , yes words has two meanings.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Inspirational poetry from a beautiful song, I loved the flow, and the pleasant, uplifting feelings. I particularly enjoyed the last two stanzas, because they were unique, the way you made them sound similar, and yet so different. Flawless write, enjoyed reading.
Posted 12 Years Ago
Inspirational poetry from a beautiful song, I loved the flow, and the pleasant, uplifting feelings. I particularly enjoyed the last two stanzas, because they were unique, the way you made them sound similar, and yet so different. Flawless write, enjoyed reading.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
I sense it as lyrics but it feels way too short without the music to swirl within!
Posted 12 Years Ago
I sense it as lyrics but it feels way too short without the music to swirl within!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
No matter how much
I try to fight,
I'm pulled up higher,
Destined for endless flight. --> amazing stanza! and i like it.. GREAT WRITe
- Kuhr Gred
Posted 12 Years Ago
No matter how much
I try to fight,
I'm pulled up higher,
Destined for endless flight. --> amazing stanza! and i like it.. GREAT WRITe
- Kuhr Gred
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Great job Alex! I love the third stanza. Excellent job!
Posted 12 Years Ago
Great job Alex! I love the third stanza. Excellent job!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Interesting poem. It was so haunting, I could hear the beating of hallow drums in the background each time you took another step up.
Great poem. Great song.
Posted 12 Years Ago
Interesting poem. It was so haunting, I could hear the beating of hallow drums in the background each time you took another step up.
Great poem. Great song.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Very well done!!!
Posted 12 Years Ago
Very well done!!!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on May 28, 2012
Last Updated on June 6, 2012
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Alex Vidmar Wakefield, RI
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I'm twenty-two years old and a musician at heart, but I took up writing five years ago. I'm hoping to get published somewhere, so I'm trying out this site.
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