Stairway

Stairway

A Chapter by Alex Vidmar
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Inspired by Led Zeppelin's "Stairway to Heaven"

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Each time it takes over,
I find myself one step higher.
Climbing that stairway,
That Stairway into Heaven.

No matter how much
I try to fight,
I'm pulled up higher,
Destined for endless flight.

Upon the whispering wind,
Are carried truth and sin.
These two words have a very fine line between
Because you know, words have two meanings.

Each time it takes over,
I find myself one step higher.
Climbing that stairway,
That Stairway into Heaven.

Each time it takes over,
I climb one step higher.
Climbing that stairway,
Up to Heaven.



© 2012 Alex Vidmar


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Inspirational poetry from a beautiful song, I loved the flow, and the pleasant, uplifting feelings. I particularly enjoyed the last two stanzas, because they were unique, the way you made them sound similar, and yet so different. Flawless write, enjoyed reading.

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AK
Brilliant poem! I love the flow! Keep writing!

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keep writing..

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Nice inspiration and nice poem, with a nice meaning in it. Very good, enjoyed this and the flow.

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This is really pretty. I love the repetition of the last two lines.

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Pax
beautiful and can fit very well in a song.

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Beautifully done. I love it. I also listened to the song that inspired it while I read it :)

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Beautiful write you have amazing talent

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good song, great poem. well done.

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this is really good!

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I love that continuous line of "one step higher"! It sort of reminds me of a hopeful push forward like The Little Train That Could saying "I think I can". This is truly a great piece!

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Alex Vidmar
Alex Vidmar

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