F*****g Raise Hell

F*****g Raise Hell

A Poem by Alex Vidmar

Rise above those who shout.
Raise Hell.
Rise Above all who hate.
Lower Heaven.

If you can't lower Heaven
Then F*****g Raise Hell.
Just f*****g raise it.
Raise it all the way to the f*****g clouds!

Destroy all of those who oppose you.
Crush all of those who complain.
Rape all the women, kill all the men.
Make all the children your slaves.

You can't lower Heaven
So f*****g Raise Hell.
F*****g raise it up.
Mother F****r.

Heaven... It's f*****g messed up.
You need to be perfect to get in.
Hell; That's the place for us all.
All you need to do is sin.

Heaven can't be lowered.
But you can f*****g Raise Hell.
Raise f*****g hell.
Raise it up....


Raise it up.

© 2012 Alex Vidmar


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I like the energy of this poem. I could tell you story of when I allow the desire to raise hell over kindness to be strong. I missed the police station by seconds many time. Good to raise hell when life is not right. Maybe if the people raise some hell and get pissed off. Leaders would pay attention to their people. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


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wow very nice and intense.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like the energy of this poem. I could tell you story of when I allow the desire to raise hell over kindness to be strong. I missed the police station by seconds many time. Good to raise hell when life is not right. Maybe if the people raise some hell and get pissed off. Leaders would pay attention to their people. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is really good. A little...morbid, but absolutely good. I loved it. :) And true.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

O.o
Very true. I like this a lot :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Alex Vidmar

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