I agree with Rebecca down there, the "they're are" kinda just twisted my tongue. Eh, and there's really no place to hide... -.-" Just like in HOTD..they were basically everywere .. It's kinda scary to think of; especially if I was in the sewers...well long story short I'm not the type to stay in dark places in a calm state for awhile.. Like the vibe in this poem though :)
I agree with Rebecca down there, the "they're are" kinda just twisted my tongue. Eh, and there's really no place to hide... -.-" Just like in HOTD..they were basically everywere .. It's kinda scary to think of; especially if I was in the sewers...well long story short I'm not the type to stay in dark places in a calm state for awhile.. Like the vibe in this poem though :)
First of all.... HEBREW IS COOL! Secondly, this is very mysterious and scary. I can imagine people walking through sewers and walkers following them silently, only to leap out and bite them when they least expect it.
That's not How Hebrew should look like, it's not read-able... But, just to make it clear, you got the title wrong.
The writing itself is Beautiful, as always.
I'm twenty-two years old and a musician at heart, but I took up writing five years ago. I'm hoping to get published somewhere, so I'm trying out this site.
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