For You, When You're Down

For You, When You're Down

A Poem by Alex Vidmar

To you, when you're down
And out.
I am always here for you,
Remember that.

However you feel,
Anytime, Anyplace
Know this.
Memorize it.
Any way you can.
Never forget that.

© 2012 Alex Vidmar


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Very straight forward. You are here no matter what. Whoever this is for is lucky to have a friend like that. This is an amazing dedication to someone. The gift of time is so great. You only have so much of it to spend as you please. I can't see any obvious form to this poem, but I think that just adds to it's appeal.

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Very cute :)

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A shoulder to lean on, short and sweet.

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Very nice :)

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nice poem Alex :) good job ^^

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Kindness: Pay it Forward. Very nice sentiment, my friend.

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I like the simplicity of it. Wonderful, short and very sweet.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very straight forward. You are here no matter what. Whoever this is for is lucky to have a friend like that. This is an amazing dedication to someone. The gift of time is so great. You only have so much of it to spend as you please. I can't see any obvious form to this poem, but I think that just adds to it's appeal.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Very sweet write

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Very wonderful write.

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j
It makes me feel very lucky having you as a friend.

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Alex Vidmar

Wakefield, RI



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