No Title

No Title

A Poem by Alex Vidmar

This poem is not meant,
To have a name put to it.
It is only to describe the feelings
I feel to the one whom it's about.

You're sweet,
Sensitive and kind.
Beautiful, in
Body, soul and mind.

You are what I have been looking for,
What I've tried to find.
This is all about you, I swear it's true.
And it needs no title, none at all, it's true.

© 2012 Alex Vidmar


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It's simple but nice sweet and cute. just something that buts me in a lovey dovey mood :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really enjoyed this

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Such a wonderful short poem, I enjoyed this write.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a sweet short poem, it's cute in how it doesn't need a title. You're right. Good job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ths is very well written. The whole "no title" thing just adds to it. Sometimes, a title isn't needed, and even having one could even damage the story or poem itself. The "no title" idea was brilliant.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is so beautiful. And its true.. some emotions are so strong, that no title can do them justice.
A beautiful poem. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love how this doesn't really have a title and that the not having a title is a part of the poem, but you didn't go on and on about it. You did a fantastic job with this. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is really sweet and I love the idea of no title for something like this. Not all things are meant to be labeled, and that is the feeling this poem evokes. Very nice!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

when you find someone, I imagine there's no name for it. It simply is a feeling that defies all words in any language :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sweet and, i don't know why, sad. it seems like love never realised or lost or something inbetween. strong write.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Alex Vidmar
Alex Vidmar

Wakefield, RI



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