Life is a one way street With a graveyard at the end. There are no cops patrolling this road, And there is no speed limit.
On this street, there are No limitations. No speed bumps. No Off Ramps, and no On Ramps.
You can take this road as fast as you like Or as slow as you want. You can risk it all, Or risk nothing at all.
Along this street, You may pick up "Hitchhikers" And you can take them to the grave with you, Or drop them off where they ask you to.
You can choose to walk this street, Or drive this road. But no matter what you choose, You can't double back.
The road ahead starts off Smooth and easy But depending on what you do, Will change the terrain ahead of you.
Choose to live recklessly, And the road will turn rocky, With potholes and death every mile, Cracks, fissures, oil spills, black ice and other things vile.
But choose to live careful, And this road will remain smooth. And you're travels only plagued by death Sporadically.
Live dangerous, and the distance to the grave Will change every millimeter. Live cautious, And the distance may grow longer.
So be forewarned, As you follow this road. Your life is yours, So let it unfold.
But you pick your own fate Remember this well. I don't care if you believe In heaven or hell.
Just remember, this road is yours. And yours alone. Have fun, And avoid traffic cones.
Ha ha, i definately enjoyed this very much! It made me think of life and even my own.. how i'm steering my own life. This is amazing. =) I love how you wrote it.
It's true. It's our own choice how we take life.. fast or slow.. it's up to us..
No one else can direct us. Just our own.. decisions..
Thanks for this. Fantastic write!
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Great lessons of wisdom, through great flowed sentences.
A poem full of life experience, roots, and perhaps most important message... Top Notch. May I say; "Спасибо"? :)
This was a very new and unique way to show the path of life to death.
The way you compared it to a one way road was really interesting, and your every stanza was full of meaning and wisdom.
I love your new style of poems :) away from vampires
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