Will This Ever End?

Please tell me,
Will this end?
Will it?
Can it?

If it does end
Will the world ever be normal again?
Will it?
If this ever ends?

With this torture of ghouls,
Return to their tombs?
Will they?
If this ends?

If this goes on for a longer time,
Will it finally end?
Should I end it?
If this never ends?

It's hopeless,
It will never end,
But I can make it end.
One last shot...

Reviews

[Alexa Tasch]

I really liked the repeating "will it?" "will they" bit. It sounded very nice. ANd the bolder fond brings a seriousness or urgency to it for me. I can imagine the person saying this being serious but freaking out at the same time. At first I thought it was going to be about what if it ended, but the you turned it into suicide and I liked it better that way. One of my favorites in this book

[Your Perfect Disaster]

This is so sad!!!!!! In the end though, I think killing himself would be the right thing to do because if the evil continues on it might not ever stop until the whole planet is wiped of humans.

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one last to the people or one last shot to yourself? oh well but i always wondered that how DO they end a fight between zombies?

[quarintine_deathangel]

Oh, shoot XDD then again the story would end.. godd chapter!