Die

Die

A Chapter by Alex Vidmar

DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

JUST F****N' LAY DOWN AND DIE!!!
I'M SICK OF YOU GETTING BACK UP!
I WISH YOU NEVER RESURFACED IN MY MEMORIES!
please... just go away.... :'(

I SAID LEAVE ME ALONE!
I DON'T WANT TO HEAR FROM YOU ANYMORE!
YOU ONLY TORTURE ME!
please... just leave me alone...


© 2012 Alex Vidmar


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Im picturing someone losing their mind in a sealed off room. Pounding on the walls and pulling out their hair not knowing what to do anymore. Just wanting.peace from the death, decay, and living dead around him or her. But they cant escape the hitting and pounding on the walls. The call for fresh flesh.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Woah angry much? Short but good. I can picture someone just unloading a clip into a hoard of zombies. The sad face was also a nice touch :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Im picturing someone losing their mind in a sealed off room. Pounding on the walls and pulling out their hair not knowing what to do anymore. Just wanting.peace from the death, decay, and living dead around him or her. But they cant escape the hitting and pounding on the walls. The call for fresh flesh.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

*looks around* Are you talking to me?

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Powerful emotions. Nice job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

pissed off at the dead. I would be too

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

[send message][befriend] Subscribe
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ME: Geez! FINE! ....I'm leaving...don't expect me to comeback though
YOU: *death glare*
ME: fine fine i'm going already

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Anger. Rage. Emotion.

I love it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow, i pictured someone screaming at someone else, and it was just... strange. i loved this short chapter, its very emotionfilled... mostly with anger.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A short chapter. A very emotional chapter. I like the feel of desperation and being pissed off. A excellent chapter.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

WOW, okay... that was a real slap in the face! I can honestly sat that this was not what i expected when i saw the title. I'll tell you one thing, you did get your point across. plain as day. great job!

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Alex Vidmar
Alex Vidmar

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