Have You Forgotten Us Already?

Have you forgotten?

You and I, and the love we had?

What we planned, and what we felt

For each other?

 

Have you forgotten?

Everything we said to each other?

The way we laughed together?

All of that?

 

Have you forgotten?

Please tell me the truth...

Have you forgotten

You and I?

 

Have you forgotten

Everything we had?

I guess you have...

You have forgotten...

Reviews

[that-little-green-monst..]

Nice emotions. It's really a poem someone can relate to. I love the repetition you use throughout the poem. Great job!

[johnnyqueer]

This is quite simple, but very easy to relate to. I've been in this position a few times. Nice write :)

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

Ohmygosh, I know how this feels.I always want to ask a particular ex the same exact questions. I hope he remembers the way I do :) Great job! I absoutely loved this!

[Morrigan Nicole]

Wonderful! Very nice!

[jennifer little]

wonderful and exalent work i give you a 100 on rating

[Molly Leanne Jasmer]

very good! I could feel the emotions and the sadness. keep writing(:

[SlipKnoT]

REALLY LOVE THIS WRITE :) it totally captures all the thoughts ive never been able to put on paper, so thank you x

[Mockingbird]

like a letter you would send to your lost lover. i feel like i am reading someone else's letter and feel guilty about it. well written poem.

[Sahar moonlight]

This was a one.
Simple yet meaningfull.
And i really liked the last two lines!
A strong ending