Undying

Undying

A Poem by Alex Vidmar

The mind's emotions are forever

Living on, and dying; never.

No matter how damaged

Nor how unduly managed,

Emotions last forever.

Feelings are forever.

Love, Hate, Fear, Confusion,

All of these last forever.

The mind is scarred.

Its wounds forever undying.

© 2012 Alex Vidmar


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This is so deep and true. Lovely piece!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i agree with you that emotions are forever, however, (as cliche as this is) time does heal the wounds. the mind will be scarred but we have to be strong enough to overcome the obstacles created for us by a scarred mind. very insightful poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Adore this! Short, but full of so much wisdom! Very well written.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Alex Vidmar
Alex Vidmar

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