Le Lapin

Le Lapin

A Poem by Alex Vidmar

Dans le noir de la nuit
Il sort pour manger
On l'appelle
Le lapin

Comme l'aube se lève
Il ya la peur dans ses yeux
Il tourne vite;
Le lapin

Il entend les hurlements
Des limiers du chasseur
Ils ferment vite sur
Le lapin

Notre ami est pris au piège
Maintenant c'est la fin,
Pour notre héros
Le lapin

Un coup de feu à
Sang recouvre sa peau,
Au revoir
Pauvre lapin

© 2012 Alex Vidmar


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I can tell this is French, oh I love how French is. Translating it... it is a sad torture to a rabbit. Though if the rabbit was a metaphor, i'm not sure what it would be but perhaps a human. Nice poem for the rabbit. Seems like a hunting experience.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I had to translate this aswell but when I read it in English I loved it! xx

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

so sweet Alex.
I was impressed :-)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is chilling.
I love it. and yeeah... i used google translate ahahahha,
but i love it. Tell me... what made yyou think of writing about this? it's kind of creepy... but ... also interesting... at the same time..
nice write :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Alex Vidmar
Alex Vidmar

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