Friendship

Friendship and friends never do part.

An ocean across, a mile apart.

A wave

A goodbye and blessing to you.

Friendship is for always and always is true.

Friendship is special and I’ll always remember the sunshine I had with you.

So farewell and goodbye; Please don't cry send me a letter and card.

Hope you enjoy, the day so far and

Remember the sunshine too.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and positive poem. I agree with the logic in the poem. Real friendship last forever. Distance shouldn't make us become apart. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[KlineXcreed]

I wrote this when I was 13,thus there is much improvement thanks so much for the feedback!

[Ranger Nadaly]

The first stanza is great. The last two are good. Also I'd change the "always" in the second stanza first line to something else because you just used that word twice in the line before and it fits better there. Good job, I like it.

[wordman]

friends forever we shall be I wrote a poem with this title
welcome aboard
ron

[Michelle N. H.]

This is so cute :) and as I do have friends spread across the planet, I can definitely relate to every word. I'm especially keen on your last line; it's something to live by.