Peace

The wind swept trough my hair as the light came over the mountains

with its welcoming warmth.

The calming smell of spring has reached me and embraced me with al its glory.

As I look at the trees they talked to me, they whisper that I to will feel the silence and the peace  of a  world long forgotten.

A peace that I have never known, a peace that I haven't seen in my lands since I was a child.

I want to feel like it's a peace that will come for us, but I cant see it, my eyes are darkened with every passing night.

All I ask is one sign that will keep me living and keep fighting for a world that is in need for freedom.

And a sign to show me that my world needs me.

Reviews

[Dutch Jr.]

Impressive right. You were quite vivid, intellectually and physically. Nature only knows peace.

A few typos: "trough" is a typo. Missed an "h". "al" is another one. "cant"; you missed the apostrophe.