Come Unto Me

The siren of sleep beckons helpless men to a death like sleep as she sings to them her lovely melody

Come unto me
in the vastness of your dreams
Invoke forbidden desires
within the safety of sleep
whisper them to me..
the words you long to speak.
Hidden in darkness you seek
I am Temptations beauty
born to the depths of your dreams.
Come unto me-
fulfill your fantasies
From the carcass of your dreams
Caressing sleep
Whispering feathers guide you to me..
where Heavens gifts are moted to thee
beneath the moonlit Hanging tree
Come unto me...
through the depths of your dreams
you belong to me,
Temptations beauty
who beckons you as you sleep
blood red lips whisper:
"Come unto me..."

Reviews

[Richard🖌]

Goodness, Dear Anna!
How beautifully tempting your sweet, flowing lines make it so easy to give-in to the sensual "siren of sleep".
This is one of your best, in my mind's-eye … I thoroughly enjoyed everything about it, and am vividly pulled into the spell of your moment … excellent poeting, M'Lady, truly.
Love this: "Come unto me..."
I've been missing your lovely Fellow Lady-Texan self lately … hoping to see you on my pages soon.

Big happy hugs with grateful smiles of thanks! ⁓ Richard : )

[annalysiar]

Thank you for your kind words you flatter me. ...

[Richard🖌]

Don't you think you deserve to be. ; )

[annalysiar]

It's a vain thought.

[Richard🖌]

Not in the eyes who respects and enjoys your writings, Anna Dear.🌸

[annalysiar]

Maybe ......

[Richard🖌]

Trust me, Dear Anna … we've been lovely friends far too long for me to blow smoke up your dress … LOL!

[annalysiar]

Kind words again... lol

[Richard🖌]

Warm words of sincerity, M'Dear Lady Texan⁓*

[annalysiar]

Being my friend... you know this time of year is hard on my heart and soul

[Richard🖌]

Bless your dear, sweet heart and soul, Anna. 🌸

[annalysiar]

And you as well Richard

[jacob erin-cilberto]

even in dreams we are not always safe---love can look like a beautiful bird but then once we are under their wing...those feathers come off and we see the reality of the person...
too late.

love the line "from the carcass of your dreams"
wish i had written that one.

[annalysiar]

Thank you for your kind words

[Jasbir Kaur]

The line that really attracted me was "invoke forbidden desires
within the safety of sleep."
I can relate this line to my life very correctly. I loved it. Thanx for sharing.
My best wishes

[annalysiar]

Thank you for your kind words and best wishes to you as well...

[Jimmy Yetts]

Being a lifelong insomniac, this piece has made me yearn--even more--to sleep longer.
Possesses the haunting nature of a partially remembered nightmare; approaches the naked appeal of a nocturnal emission.
Work with impact, Annalysiar!

[annalysiar]

I don't know if its the lack or sleep or lack of Intelligence on my end but I can't tell if this is a good thing or a bad thing...😊

[Jimmy Yetts]

My remarks were meant to be honest and complimentary.
I'll remove the review if it offends you.

[annalysiar]

Oh no it doesn't offend me...
I'm.just mentally fried...three months of hell..
either way, i
flattered and I'm humbled that you read and liked my poem. This one is one of my favorites.
I prefer and enjoy honesty. Its lying that offends me

[Jimmy Yetts]

Glad we're squared away.
"Come Unto Me" is an outstanding read.

[annalysiar]

Ooh this is so kind you just made my sleepless night😃😃😃

[XVCrow]

this beautifully written poem seems to have something dark lingering in it. interesting, and thank you for sharing

[annalysiar]

Thank yoi for reading. I'm honored.
yes I was going for that hint of darkness...im so glad you saw it