Come Unto Me

The siren of sleep beckons helpless men to a death like sleep as she sings to them her lovely melody

Come unto me
in the vastness of your dreams
Invoke forbidden desires
within the safety of sleep
whisper them to me..
the words you long to speak.
Hidden in darkness you seek
I am Temptations beauty
born to the depths of your dreams.
Come unto me-
fulfill your fantasies
From the carcass of your dreams
Caressing sleep
Whispering feathers guide you to me..
where Heavens gifts are moted to thee
beneath the moonlit Hanging tree
Come unto me...
through the depths of your dreams
you belong to me,
Temptations beauty
who beckons you as you sleep
blood red lips whisper:
"Come unto me..."

Reviews

[Richard🖌]

Goodness, Dear Anna!
How beautifully tempting your sweet, flowing lines make it so easy to give-in to the sensual "siren of sleep".
This is one of your best, in my mind's-eye … I thoroughly enjoyed everything about it, and am vividly pulled into the spell of your moment … excellent poeting, M'Lady, truly.
Love this: "Come unto me..."
I've been missing your lovely Fellow Lady-Texan self lately … hoping to see you on my pages soon.

Big happy hugs with grateful smiles of thanks! ⁓ Richard : )

[annalysiar]

Thank you for your kind words you flatter me. ...

[Richard🖌]

Don't you think you deserve to be. ; )

[annalysiar]

It's a vain thought.

[Richard🖌]

Not in the eyes who respects and enjoys your writings, Anna Dear.🌸

[annalysiar]

Maybe ......

[Richard🖌]

Trust me, Dear Anna … we've been lovely friends far too long for me to blow smoke up your dress … LOL!

[annalysiar]

Kind words again... lol

[Richard🖌]

Warm words of sincerity, M'Dear Lady Texan⁓*

[annalysiar]

Being my friend... you know this time of year is hard on my heart and soul

[Richard🖌]

Bless your dear, sweet heart and soul, Anna. 🌸

[annalysiar]

And you as well Richard

[The Silver Tongued Devi..]

Now you have to Transfer Your Thoughts From a Sleeping state to a Awake state and Enjoy Pleasures You have only Dreamed About. I just joined and posted two of mine. Check them out
Yours is Beautifully Written.

[annalysiar]

Thank you for your kind words

[Abhishek Izy]

This is wonderful, maybe not intended but almost edging into the sensuality and well truly reflects how better you can imagine as an artist

[θεά]

The beckoning of the narrator through her tone and repetition induces the reader to a state of trance and dependence. The promise of suspending pain and being cocooned in a nest of love and hope is all too tempting. What waits to be seen if this is a siren's call or that of true love. My bet is on the former.

Very expert way of handling a bold theme like this.

Best,
M.

[annalysiar]

Thank you for your kind words...

[KCthelastboyscout]

I've been sick for the last 3 days so for a good night sleep even this seems tempting.
This is a very elegant and lovely story
Its like you're unable to escape its hypnotic spell

[annalysiar]

I thank you. I'm sorry to hear you've been sick I hope you get well soon

[William Gardner]

I enjoyed the transition from carcass to caressing- I feel a sirens call here leading you to doom. Thank you!

[boygene borice]

Come unto me
in the vastness of your dreams
Invoke forbidden desires
within the safety of sleep
whisper them to me..
When love touches the heart, you can't be silent but to let out such beautiful words

[annalysiar]

Thanks for reading

[FJ Davis]

An elegantly written and decidedly tempting invitation.
Powerful offering!

[annalysiar]

Thank you for your kind words...thank you for reading

[SleeplessVolcano]

You created great imagery with this poem. I like the whisper coming from blood.....

Just one observation - would "Temptations' beauty" require an apostrophe, if you are referring to the beauty belonging to various temptations?

[annalysiar]

Ah too true... im no good at grammar however ill be sure to fix it.
Thank you for your kind words as well

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

The sands of sleep, the silky swift breeze that carries over the faces of those dusty night ideas, to come or to dive, the fantasies will be open to the vulnerable spirit.

[annalysiar]

Very nicely put you have a goos hand