Memories that keep you up at night...what can they really be called
In my dream
I see me and you...
perhaps this dream is a nightmare come true
take my bleeding heart
and tear it apart
colorful bruises mask my part
In my dream, I can lie and let go
This nightmare is my stage less show.
Here I stand
your merciless doll
take my body and have your call
Whispering shadows guide me so
say you love me just for show
Oh this dream of you and me
This nightmare is my memory...
scars cover once flawless skin
The rush that comes...
from touching the End
Dancing along Deaths edge
Shadows grace me
upon the devils bed
Whispering voices
feather like touches
Dancing dreams with innocents blushes
slapped away by a bruising hand
This is my nightmarish dream land.
I do hope this isn't a true memory, that is traumatic; yet, it is so dark and beautiful. I can imagine what happened to you, the pain you must have felt. The betrayal. Evoking such strong emotions on a reader takes talent, talent that you possess.
Thanks for sharing!
Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
What I endured, his words were like hits, took me down so far.
and you're right the pain and .. read moreWhat I endured, his words were like hits, took me down so far.
and you're right the pain and betrayal I felt more towards myself...
but is in the past, and only comes out at night😃😃
I am glad you read and enjoyed my poem 😃😃😃
8 Years Ago
I love your poetry. I love poetry in general. Especially those that speak of love, or pain as this o.. read moreI love your poetry. I love poetry in general. Especially those that speak of love, or pain as this one does. I recently went through a painful experience inflicted upon me by the one I love, I am dealing with it, and it is hard. Writing is my outlet.
8 Years Ago
Yes, pain from those you open yourself to and come to love is the worst. This I can empathize with. .. read moreYes, pain from those you open yourself to and come to love is the worst. This I can empathize with. Writing is a great outlet, and so is talking. If you need to talk I will listen.
remember, you survived and in that you are strong. You are coming out and in that have hope. For yourself...
Beautiful but tragic. The feelings of pain and hoping to escape have been expressed very nicely.
I hope its nothing more then a dream now...
Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
I think the only thing I imagine is my stories...
I'm really glad you enjoyed this and that y.. read moreI think the only thing I imagine is my stories...
I'm really glad you enjoyed this and that you read it, thank you
Beautiful poem. So sad, though! I like your work with words and how you express emotions so clearly. Why don't you divide it into stanzas? It would look better, in my opinion.
Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
You know armin I agree. And it will be done. Thanks for the tip😉
also thank you for readin.. read moreYou know armin I agree. And it will be done. Thanks for the tip😉
also thank you for reading I'm glad you enjoyed it😃😃😃
I do hope this isn't a true memory, that is traumatic; yet, it is so dark and beautiful. I can imagine what happened to you, the pain you must have felt. The betrayal. Evoking such strong emotions on a reader takes talent, talent that you possess.
Thanks for sharing!
Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
What I endured, his words were like hits, took me down so far.
and you're right the pain and .. read moreWhat I endured, his words were like hits, took me down so far.
and you're right the pain and betrayal I felt more towards myself...
but is in the past, and only comes out at night😃😃
I am glad you read and enjoyed my poem 😃😃😃
8 Years Ago
I love your poetry. I love poetry in general. Especially those that speak of love, or pain as this o.. read moreI love your poetry. I love poetry in general. Especially those that speak of love, or pain as this one does. I recently went through a painful experience inflicted upon me by the one I love, I am dealing with it, and it is hard. Writing is my outlet.
8 Years Ago
Yes, pain from those you open yourself to and come to love is the worst. This I can empathize with. .. read moreYes, pain from those you open yourself to and come to love is the worst. This I can empathize with. Writing is a great outlet, and so is talking. If you need to talk I will listen.
remember, you survived and in that you are strong. You are coming out and in that have hope. For yourself...
Imagines of abuse and sadly a love tied by a dream of what once was.
An emotional and vivid piece.
bill
Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
Thank you for reading it makes me very happy...
I'm glad you enjoyed this and you are complet.. read moreThank you for reading it makes me very happy...
I'm glad you enjoyed this and you are completely right😃
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Posted 8 Years Ago
2 of 3 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
Thank you, you are kind. I honestly thought this was nonsense
I'm a simple person normally the quiet person in the room. My thing is honesty... Trust and we're great. Where I'm from trust is all you have.
I love to write and I love to read.
I have horrible gr.. more..