Nightmarish Memory

Nightmarish Memory

A Poem by annalysiar
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Memories that keep you up at night...what can they really be called

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In my dream
I see me and you...
perhaps this dream is a nightmare come true
take my bleeding heart
and tear it apart
colorful bruises mask my part

In my dream, I can lie and let go
This nightmare is my stage less show.
Here I stand
your merciless doll
take my body and have your call
Whispering shadows guide me so
say you love me just for show

Oh this dream of you and me
This nightmare is my memory...
scars cover once flawless skin
The rush that comes...
from touching the End

Dancing along Deaths edge
Shadows grace me
upon the devils bed
Whispering voices
feather like touches

Dancing dreams with innocents blushes
slapped away by a bruising hand
This is my nightmarish dream land.

© 2016 annalysiar


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I do hope this isn't a true memory, that is traumatic; yet, it is so dark and beautiful. I can imagine what happened to you, the pain you must have felt. The betrayal. Evoking such strong emotions on a reader takes talent, talent that you possess.

Thanks for sharing!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Obscured by the Shadows

8 Years Ago

Thank you, strong words and strong hope is all I can hold onto.
annalysiar

8 Years Ago

You are welcome. Us women need to stick together in times like these
Obscured by the Shadows

8 Years Ago

Indeed....



Reviews

Beautiful but tragic. The feelings of pain and hoping to escape have been expressed very nicely.
I hope its nothing more then a dream now...

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

annalysiar

8 Years Ago

I think the only thing I imagine is my stories...
I'm really glad you enjoyed this and that y.. read more
Beautiful poem. So sad, though! I like your work with words and how you express emotions so clearly. Why don't you divide it into stanzas? It would look better, in my opinion.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

annalysiar

8 Years Ago

I fixed it, I hope it helped
Archos

8 Years Ago

As for me, I like it a lot more this way.
annalysiar

8 Years Ago

Me too thanks for the pointer😃😃😃
I do hope this isn't a true memory, that is traumatic; yet, it is so dark and beautiful. I can imagine what happened to you, the pain you must have felt. The betrayal. Evoking such strong emotions on a reader takes talent, talent that you possess.

Thanks for sharing!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Obscured by the Shadows

8 Years Ago

Thank you, strong words and strong hope is all I can hold onto.
annalysiar

8 Years Ago

You are welcome. Us women need to stick together in times like these
Obscured by the Shadows

8 Years Ago

Indeed....
Imagines of abuse and sadly a love tied by a dream of what once was.
An emotional and vivid piece.

bill

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

annalysiar

8 Years Ago

Thank you for reading it makes me very happy...
I'm glad you enjoyed this and you are complet.. read more
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Posted 8 Years Ago


2 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Rose Jaeger Kaneki

8 Years Ago

welcome, thanks and this write was no nonsense at all!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
annalysiar

8 Years Ago

Lol thank you again, you're kind
Rose Jaeger Kaneki

8 Years Ago

lol welcome and thanks

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Added on January 21, 2016
Last Updated on November 22, 2016

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annalysiar
annalysiar

san antonio, TX



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I'm a simple person normally the quiet person in the room. My thing is honesty... Trust and we're great. Where I'm from trust is all you have. I love to write and I love to read. I have horrible gr.. more..

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