Unbound

Imagination is the most powerful tool your mind has...

The world spins round and round
Flowers bloom then wilt
Beauty comes and goes
Things that matters-
Is the long time woes
Here I sit - thinking of time...
wondering, dreaming
What could have been mine
The world spins
Round and round
Time take her course
A river unbound
Age graces her hand
And leaves nothing unfound
life
Death
The circle be searched
The world spins
Round and round
Hear my heart beat
The steady drumming sound.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked the wisdom in your words.
"The world spins
Round and round
Hear my heart beat
The steady drumming sound. "
I agree. Life is a circle. Sometime we end up in the same place we started. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[annalysiar]

Thank you I'm really glad you liked it

[Coyote Poetry]

I did and you are welcome.

[Richard🖌]

Hello, Fellow Texan! : )
Like "The Great Mandala" all in life and the universe has its circuit and orbit that spins 'round and 'round … it literally applies to everything in existence, and you've expressed it very succinctly in this excellent poem, Anna.
The content of this piece reveals much about your perceptions of life in general and your insights of human nature, as-well.
In helpful critique, Anna, your skills would greatly improve if you were to resist beginning every line unnecessarily with a capital, as it chops the flow and prevents a natural rhythm, and if proper punctuation were applied throughout to help guide your readers into runs, enjambments, stops, pauses, etc. Just some things to consider. Any help wanted, just let me know. : )

I like this very much, Anna, and see some fine potential for your poetry, with a bit of refinement and polishing you'll master the Free Style form in no time.
Thank you so much for sharing this very enjoyable poem, Anna … smiles 'n blessings! ⁓ Richard

[annalysiar]

Exactly exactly what I need to hear lol for an AP English student I can't use proper English grammar to save my life lol any help I van get would be very much appreciated... Thank you Richard for your advice, for enjoying my poem and for helping me 😄

[alifeacoustic]

Very nicely done. Time moves on, we grow and evolve. The person remains the same, it's just the packaging that changes.

[annalysiar]

Thank you I'm glad you liked it