Life’s way

enjoy :)

Our path has been set

By the God above

To do our best

And give all we have

 

I know it’s not easy

 For the criticizers are every where

And it is very tricky

For they are aware

 

 On what we do

And what we did

What we find

And what we hide

 

But my dear friend

Do not be alarm

Just wisely bend

And you will not be harm

Reviews

[Irenic]

another very realistic poem.
I truly describes in few words that we afraid of being judged and criticized and due to that fear we step backward.
in the end the message you give concludes the poem very well.
Thanks for sharing:)
waiting for your next poem!

[LapseOfMind]

I enjoyed this, well done. I agree with the message, one must all be strong as society loves to try and tear us down

[andrew mitchell]

Nice work just a couple of typos alarmed and harmed not without the "ed"

[Coyote Poetry]

Great wisdom in your words.
"But my dear friend
Do not be alarm
Just wisely bend
And you will not be harm"
The above lines. A good way to live. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[iamshadowine]

Truth can be read above in the poem! i really liked how you framed it into a poem! :D
keep writing :D

[Ted Kniffen]

Well done piece. The sentiment is good. I like it. There are a couple of small things. 'On what we do' should probably read 'Of what we do' and the final verse 'harm' & alarm' should be harmed & alarmed. Good write.

[JainieJane]

Beautifully said! I like this!