Death Note

The rope that hung from above
Is the perfect swing when you're blue
The blade that gently touches my flesh
And tenderly hugs my wrist

The medicine that puts me to slumber
Is the medicine that will help me rest in peace
And the liquid that cleans silver
Is the liquid I crave the most

Once again our paths have crossed
But this time I promise you this
That we'll never cross paths
For we'll walk the same path

Oh death! Hold me tightly
And never let me go
For we'll wali the same path
That you once took alone

Reviews

[Cassie]

This one tags at heart, are you alright. I feel this is suicidal. I hope you are oke

[Coyote Poetry]

If you want to find death. He shall come.
"Oh death! Hold me tightly
And never let me go
For we'll wali the same path
That you once took alone"
I liked the above lines. Powerful and worthwhile thoughts. Had the feel of the ancient writers. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Ted Kniffen]

A good poem. A cry for help? Hopefully just a nice piece of writing. Good write.

[LapseOfMind]

Though you've done well in composition, I wonder at your intent. The poem itself is well done and so makes me wonder, are you all right?

[BlakHeart]

Honestly no. At this point of time I am at the edge of giving up

[LapseOfMind]

Giving up in what manner?

[BlakHeart]

giving up in life and embracing suicide

[Mifa]

Or you could take the alternative route and vent you frustration and depression on pen and paper like you just did. Be safe.

[LapseOfMind]

Ah, I see. Personally, I'd rather see you write more. Use the pain that you feel and express it through writing. You would bless the world that way. You affect so many people when you post your work and there are a lot of people out there who feel the same as you but are blessed through your writing. It would be selfish to take your own life. Stay with us and keep writing, we need you