Wasted tears

enjoy :)

hI wish I was the reason
why you shed your tears
not in pain
but in joy

but I can never be
the reason behind your pain
and the cry of your agony
for this is all for her

But that's fine
for I am here for you
to wipe away the tears
thst has been wasted because of her

Reviews

[Irenic]

whether your loved ones cares for you or not but you cares for him or her; that is the reality. And your poem is painting that reality.

Good write!
Keep on Writing! :)

[Emily]

Lovely wording!
I really liked the meaning!
Keep it up!!

[Riya patel]

Such a nice piece of art
Feelings were very clear and it touched my heart.

[samparks,sam]

Feeling were always alive in life
Company of someone push as ahead
Life is not end of the destination
But need tight hold at all
We are alive for ever

Nice poem you write

[Mifa]

Good one. A tale of heart wrenching friend zoning. Certainly, I've been there. Lol. Keep writing though. Great read.

[Tessa Melendez]

It's clear that the narrator has feelings for the person being spoken of in this poem. But, it's sad that the narrator has to act like they don't really care about the person being spoken of because that person doesn't care about the narrator, only some other girl.

[GalaxyGhost]

Oh man, this hit me hard with sadness. Great mix of words and a tone of regret or pain in this. Gosh, I can feel heart-break here. :'(

[AliciaB]

Enjoy? This is SAD... but touching at the same time. The speaker clearly has strong feelings for the subject of this poem, but she conceals those for his sake, keeping her thoughts to herself and providing comfort for him. Nice work!

[Inject Positivity]

"but I can never be /the reason behind your pain/and the cry of your agony/for this is all for her" the lines brings so much thoughts in the reader's mind... I can feel the desire and the hurt in the Poet's words... Beautiful work...

Sincerely
Dhiman

[Nwang]

Your poem reminds me of the song "Dancing on my own" by Robyn covered by Callum Scott.Great writing.Keep sharing :)