Who am I

Guess who am I

I am the daughter of the west
The maiden of the east
First of the north
Respected by the south

I am the voice of the mime
The eyes of the blind
walls of the weak
And foundation of the strong

I am a part of music
Lister of story
Absorber of expressions
Expresser of emotions

I am a fish in the sea
That dream to be
The biggest one in the sea
And that's all I want to be

Reviews

[Emily]

Love this!!
Keep up the great work!

[Marianne Rose]

Well, I puzzled over this one, read it again and again it so intrigued me, if riddle it actually is. All my guesses fit a stanza or two but not all of them - the moon, hands, Kwan Yin, a smile, a mountain, a wave - if it is a riddle, will you tell us? Probably not- but it was fun guessing . . . Very intriguing poem. Maybe it's you!

[BlakHeart]

you're correct every stanza describe who i am . you're a great guesser ^_^

[andrew mitchell]

This reads of a Eastern God maybe Buddha. Nice work!

[zunie frost]

Really intresting poem to read .
I love the beautiful flow of your work .
Great job

[BlakHeart]

thank you so much :)

[Teja]

Great work . Really interesting and well written too . Enjoyed reading this.

[Vatsal Rohilla (account..]

To me it seems- I may be incorrect- that you are talking about God. He is everywhere around, in you, in me, in the keyboard I am using to type this review, in the screen on which I am reading this wonderful piece of yours- just everywhere.
Your poem has a smooth flow to it, and the style is interesting. The rhyme works well. The last two lines of the second last stanza are brilliant- my favourite, actually. Perfectly penned poem. Keep writing.

[BlakHeart]

Thank you so much :)

[GalaxyGhost]

It is reminding me of the style of Tolkien. I like how it was like a riddle sort of poem.

[BlakHeart]

Thank you so much :)

[AliciaB]

This is interesting. I like how every stanza deals with a slightly different aspect of the speaker's identity. My favorite part is the paradoxes in the lines "I am the voice of the mime / The eyes of the blind." Nice work!

[BlakHeart]

Thank you so much :)

[Tessa Melendez]

An interesting, well-written piece. Well done.

[BlakHeart]

Thank you so much :)