Opposite love

I have loved you once
But never again

You filled my emptiness
Yet crushed my heart

You've brought my spirit back
Yet kills my soul

You've learn to love me
But I've forgot my love for you

Reviews

[Tessa Melendez]

The message is clear, but it could use some work. Perhaps, work on the rhyme scheme a little, add some figurative language, play with the words, add more detail about the situation, something of that. If you do at least one of those things, I think this piece could be a lot better. =)