God's will

This I dedicate to my idol

Do not mind others who criticise you
For they don't know your story

Do not mind those who question your love
For they don't know your heart beat

Do not be down if they tease you
For they are ignorant on what you did

Just do what you're meant to do
For that is God's will

Reviews

[JainieJane]

Simple but beautiful, well done!

[Marianne Rose]

Simple but wise words, that I actually could use right now. Thank you for revealing your nature in this guidance poem, and saying it so clearly in an authentic voice. Well done.

[BlakHeart]

thank you very much :)

[Teja]

Very beautiful poem. The poem is full of positivity . Nice one.

[BlakHeart]

thank you very much :)

[GalaxyGhost]

I love the beauty of this! Don't worry about others, so don't be someone else's second version when you can be your best, first version.

[BlakHeart]

thank you :)

[GalaxyGhost]

You're welcome!

[??????]

This made me smile:) Thank you for sharing:)

[BlakHeart]

You're welcome I'm glad toake you smile :)

[Zaliodir]

I quite like the message in this poem. Its very good. =) In the first line you have one minor mistake. Criticises should be just criticise.
Salamaat po! =)