Beautiful Lie

I dreamed that some day our world would experience world piece and eternal love
I hope that someday our world treat everyone equally
I wish that someday we would make a difference and probe to the world that we can do it!
But all of them are tied up into hopes, nailed onto wishes and locked up in dreams.
I wanted to break trough. And so I did.
I thought it was the start of my difference, but I was wrong. Should have never break through.
I want to live lies and fantacies again. But I can't for I have entered a cruel world.
At first it was good but as time passes by it became worst
I've seen everything . Cruelty,violence,molestion ,discrimination , and many more.
I did not just seen them but experience them all. Yes all.
And by that time I wanted to embrace death.
It may be ugly and painful but was not cruel as life.
But then again life saves me again by its charming and beautiful lies.
By that time I was confused. But I have to make a choice .
Death is a very ugly and painful truth that everybody hates and gives agony and misery for years.
Yet life is a very beautiful lie that gives us memories that we will treasure for centuries.
So I chose life over death for life will give us happiness that death can never give.
It may be a beautiful lie but it is not painful as death

Reviews

[barleygirl]

This is a very timely message, with the world going crazy the way it is. We all feel this way, that life is almost too messed up to deal with . . . and we often choose to create a lie that helps us live thru the craziness without going crazy. I love the way you've combined these two contrasting ideas -- live a lie or die!?!?! It's rare for a message to be so blunt & honest, but it's true. These really ARE the choices, sometimes in life.

I felt your message was especially strong in the area where you are sharing what you've gone thru, starting with the line "I've seen everything . . . " and it's very powerful when you say: "I did not just see them, but experience them all. Yes all." The only thing that might make this part of your message stronger (in the future -- not saying you need to change this story) . . . . more details to show us what these harsh things were, that you experienced . . . instead of using more general statements: "Cruelty, violence, molestion, discrimination" . . . the more specific your writing is, the more powerful & relatable it will be.