Martyr

Created by a broken heart

It herts to see you with someone new

But then again it felt very odd

For I was happy for you 

But maybe this is the will of God

To let me see you with someone new

I will keep the pain to me

For I knew I was not for you

And let it just be

Author's Note

This is my first poem and I would like to know your reaction

Reviews

[James]

I really like it. the rhyming and meter is nice, it flows really well. I'm not sure of the title though. I didn't get the feel of martyrdom. It was more of a feeling of accepting the situation and coming to terms with fate.

Very nice.

[BlakHeart]

Thank you :D

[barleygirl]

Good poetic structure and your message is something we can all relate to. I think "martyr" is a bit harsh to label this narrator . . . I see this more as a loving gesture of acceptance, a journey we have all had to make, when we can't be with the one we love.

[BlakHeart]

thank you :D

[LapseOfMind]

Nice rhyme scheme, good meter and definitely relatable. Good job!

[BlakHeart]

Thank you :D

[Zaliodir]

Ito ay isang napaka-gandang tula, at ako nagustuhan ito lubos ng maraming. Mahusay na pagsisimula sa mga tula, Ako ay nasasabik na basahin ang iyong iba pang mga poems. Paumanhin kung ang aking tagalog ay hindi masyadong mabuti.

[BlakHeart]

Thank you :). Don't worry I'm sure you'll master Filipino language any time soon :)

[Zaliodir]

Salamaat po. I don't think I will get it very soon. It took me almost 10 minutes to come up with that, but thank you for the encouragement.