Graceful moon

This is a piece about the moon. I really love the moon.!!

Graceful Moon.

The moon, shining as graceful as it can be,

Leaving a tickling feeling behind.

For all the ones that are able to recognize,

The moon is more than a shining planet in the nights.

It brings us the feeling of hope,

How dark it may be,

The moon is there to lighten your path.

Abandoning the fears,

Brought by darkness.

Cherished by the stars,

The moon at his complete beauty,

Is full moon.

It will never be abandoned,

Not even when it's gone.

The hope he gave at full moon,

Still lingers with us.

 

-Kimberley-H-

Author's Note

* Thanks for reading, please comment, critique *

Reviews

[Dominic Rosales]

Very nice, it is great and beautifully written. Good first poem and hopes are up for more great poems to be shared. Thanks for sharing.

[A]

I really like this! I love looking at the moon and stars too. I don't have a critique. I think this poem is great! :)