Gentle Song

 

Sing to me gentle

so I can see you

Sing to me gentle

Because my heart in mental

Sing to me gentle

For I am rough

Sing to me gentle

Only my skin is tough

Sing to me gentle

so I recognize the sad ,happy cress’s of your lips

Sing to me gentle

so I can hear

Sing to me gentle

Loudness colors I fear

Sing to me gentle

For that is our secret handshake

Sing to me gentle

A song that is familiar

Sing to me gentle

For this blackness is a killer

Sing to me gentle

so I can picture how you cry

Sing to me gentle

so I can feel your goodbyes

 

Sing to me gentle

So out of a muddle crowd your voice I can find

 

sing to me gentle

Because I am blind

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Jeff Loquist]

This honestly makes my heart ache. Your talent at putting emotion into your words completely draws them out of the reader. And while you beg for a gentle singing this work hits you like a ton of bricks

[bluessadmood]

Ohh what beauty ..how i could feel your words,i swear ,like you were talking to me..and i hear you
sing gently so i see you through your words..my heart aches and mind not working
want you to reverse all the wrong things in me..i may sound rough and skin is tough
you words softens all that outer shell..sing gently to me,wanna hear your blues,let me share and feel your lips move..
loneliness i fear..want you to kill it with your words..your songs kill all the blackness in me
sing to me so out of many i could hear you again and feel safe again and feel you again ,for now i cant really see
ohh what loveliness ,as usual..those words so moving..so magical
lovely write..

[K R I S]

that was outstanding