Caution

 

Caution

Am I really warning you

Or concerning you

Flames taking over a feeling left by the night

No one here to see the tree fall

So it didn’t make a sound at all

Ancient language written by a man in hell

Caution

By the sound of my voice you tell I don’t give a f**k

The movement of my step leave the most heartless man out of breathes

Figure it will remind this way for future years are curse her healthy body away

Fake conversations she turns on

Their sick, she/he died

Okay

She replies

Caution

She’s been broken hearted for souls that stoled her own

Now her hands and body are the only things she owns

The untitled beating spirit sits in a chair that no longer has cushion

Behead her beautiful face she takes and takes

Caution

Am I really warning you

Or concerning you

Reviews

[Kyng Kemuel IV]

i like the piece a lot as a whole but the
"No one here to see the tree fall
So it didn't make a sound at all
Ancient language written by a man in hell
Caution" yea that's my fav but also "The movement of my step leave the most heartless man out of breathes"
i've been that heartless man so i really feel this. Good Work!

[visions of doom]

very dark but very readable , i do hope the light of love will illuminate the darkness every once in a while . very well written poem chuckles .

[City Sky]

Much love,
CitySky

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

amazing piece... showing how being jaded by love can turn someone from a caring person to a cold hearted greedy person.

[Joel Alvarado]

This is a very enjoyable, dark, yet to me somewhat humorous. This sounds like the combined thoughts of people who share the same opinion as you. Nicely done!

[Vansgirlrocks]

wow
i really like ur poem :)

[Jon Lattone]

Ohh ya! That was nice. It was like, dark and sorrowful.. it felt really creative. Good work on that :)

[JustKeith]

Yes, very well done indeed. Brava!!

[Dionysus Cain]

i like the movement in the words. are you warning or just pay attention to detail. I like the overall write.

She's been broken hearted for souls that stoled her own
Now her hands and body are the only things she owns

this was nice, it really had it's own presence.

[perfectlymetiKulous]

I really enjoyed this... well-written, intricate piece.