Eyes Wide Shut

 

Eyes wide shut

No love, pain to glory

Poor to riches fucked up played out story

No moral or meaning

No AAA expression from FINING

I swear im clean

Again

Cocaine makes me sane

Not  a party outlet of confidence

Its just like oxygen

I need it

DON’T  just look at the damn words

F*****G READ IT

Right now the room is silent and I hear my heart beating

Repeating the same beat

Doom doom doom

S**t im doomed

My sweat becomes comfort from something human

God doesn’t answer my prayer when im in this gloom

I think the devil sleeps in my room

With his eyes wide shut

Another bad trip

Now my mind is playing tricks

Im not goona say it cause I know you want it

To lay back in touch myself under this bad judgement

Then my trip turns him on

The s**t seems so wrong

But it felt so good

Like it should

His hands rubs my tigh

While his closing my eyes

Now all wrongs are sounds

Hours and hours go by

Coming down

Look around

No one there just a empty room

With a can and a spoon

Again the devil must have slept  in my room

Too bad I missed him

Ran out of luck

Bad trip

With my eyes wide shut

Author's Note

just another day

Reviews

[Z]

Wow......I've read through quite a bit of your writings and all I can say is....INTENSE! Your style is no style, uncommon intertwinings of reality, and quite frankly, leaving me breathless.
And yes, that's a good thing. Keep it comin'!

[Flo_writer]

lol, well it's my opinion that true creativity appears when your high. I liked your poem by the way.

"No one there just a empty room
With a can and a spoon
Again the devil must have slept in my room
Too bad I missed him
Ran out of luck
Bad trip
With my eyes wide shut"

"Just another day"

[DC Gentleman]

Very vivid.. the painful energy is felt thru this .. this was a excellent trip you took us on.. from the first to the last word you had me transfixed...

Awesome..

[mR668]

Hey Kim. Very intense subject & write. The picture you painted was all that! I likes....gotta read more from you.

[Michael Lopez]

i write while im fukt up most the time...
its just doesnt seem like you party hard...

my faverite line...

"With a can and a spoon
Again the devil must have slept in my room
Too bad I missed him"

[Spilled Her Guts in Cur..]

wow. Really intense and awesome imagery. Nice work :)

[[untitled]]

great write i really enjoyed this one ...well written

[Kimberly Smith]

the mistake in this poem i decide to keep even tho i notice..i was high well writing it soooo lol

[M. Amphet Salt]

Nice...I can relate...in a sense to all references. I liked this piece.

There were a few typo errors

These lines"

Im not goona say it cause I know you want it - Goona is misspelled. Should be gonna
To lay back in touch myself under this bad judgement- Preposition of in is wrong. It works with dialouge, but with properness it should be and.

His hands rubs my tigh-- I think you meant thigh for tigh.

I love the sexiness of this piece. It's beautiful.

[James K. Blaylock]

I really enjoyed this piece. Great ending!

jkb