Mediocrity

Mediocrity

A Poem by KimBeaty
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Feeling Mediocre...

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I dream of things that cannot be
Beauty, Strength, Serenity

I want things that are not for me
Wealth, Love, Tranquility

In this life all I see
Ordinary, Boring, Inferiority

This is what is meant for me
Ugly, Weak, Mediocrity

© 2010 KimBeaty


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Not a positive ending to your poem. Life is a wild and crazy journey. We must look for the good in a life. Disappointment allow us to change dreams and goals. A powerful poem.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago


I really like this poem. You have captivated emotion that almost anyone can relate to. This poem is anything but mediocre.

Posted 14 Years Ago


oh what an awful way to feel! Break free! There's nothing ordinary about life, really. Boring is a sign that things need to change, add some color to your hues! And with the ability to free your words like that, there is no inferiority complex to be had!

Posted 14 Years Ago



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KimBeaty
KimBeaty

Manassas, VA



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I'm 37, total geek, internet nerd, avid reader, brilliantly mediocre. Please visit my website and join in the discussions! http://writersoutpost.blogspot.com more..

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