A Journeys End.

A Journeys End.

A Poem by Firefly
"

the passing of life.

"
Bright white, tears at your eyes.
Unable to move,
unable to breath.
Solitary, yet surrounded.

This beautiful tragedy.
Unacceptable, but undeniable.
Agonising pain, followed by
agonising numbness.

We are warm,
and yet feel nothing but cold.
Our hands, still in place,
iehter side of this tablet.

Wimpers echoe through
this hell.
All cut to a singular
sound of an exhale, but no inhale.

All these feelings fade,
disperse into the dark.
but which you first thought was cold,
you find only warmth.

© 2013 Firefly


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Sad, but, sooo enjoyable. :') It's one of these poems that I want to keep reading until I've grasped some meaning behind every line, and I'll enjoy each read. It's very well written, nicely done Cathal :') (Give it one more read through, there's, maybe, 2 typos? Just so chuu knows :3 )

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Firefly

11 Years Ago

hahaha, just looking over my older poems :) thank you :)
DarkRainbowPie

11 Years Ago

No problem.... fix those typos though, please :3 Agh, OCD has grabbed hold of me! x'D
Firefly

11 Years Ago

Ok ok ok :P



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Sad, but, sooo enjoyable. :') It's one of these poems that I want to keep reading until I've grasped some meaning behind every line, and I'll enjoy each read. It's very well written, nicely done Cathal :') (Give it one more read through, there's, maybe, 2 typos? Just so chuu knows :3 )

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Firefly

11 Years Ago

hahaha, just looking over my older poems :) thank you :)
DarkRainbowPie

11 Years Ago

No problem.... fix those typos though, please :3 Agh, OCD has grabbed hold of me! x'D
Firefly

11 Years Ago

Ok ok ok :P

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Added on February 27, 2013
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Firefly
Firefly

Dublin, Apatheistic, Ireland



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Im a late writer, but write everyday, whenever i can about whatever i can. I tend to write about dark subjuects that have a brighter underlying beauty. My subjects can also be serious, regarding cu.. more..

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