For my own smile.

For my own smile.

A Poem by Kilaw13

Finding anyway to make others smile, even if I have to crawl on gravel for a mile. I'm reaching a point of unbearable pain, not on the outside but on the inside. This is my endless loop in purgatory. No more tears, I've used up every last drop. That hole is looking good, I'm going in. Can you do me a favor, after I have done so much for you? Just fill my new home with dirt, when I am in don't put a gravestone on top. I don't want to be found. Not a sound or a peep, finally I will know peace and i can sleep.

© 2018 Kilaw13


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Has the sound of a pleaser bitter because of lack of reciprocation. Perhaps there is a lesson here. If we are too needy, we will inevitably encounter takers.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Kilaw13

6 Years Ago

I totally agree. Thank you very much, I appreciate your thoughts and your time.

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Kilaw13
Kilaw13

El Paso, TX



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A Poem by Kilaw13