Letters from Mark to Brandy after a long distance over the phone relation that have some of love and friendship.
PS: Brandy is a girl's name... couldn't come up with a better one !
These letters that you have posted thus far offer a hard look at Mark's life. I could see this as a series of short scenes that play through Mark's life, all the while in the corner of the screen is a small vignette of Brandy reading each letter as the story unfolds on the rest of the screen.
The tale is in a way intoxicating, it lures the reader in to Mark's world and his heartache for the girl. Great Ink!
These letters that you have posted thus far offer a hard look at Mark's life. I could see this as a series of short scenes that play through Mark's life, all the while in the corner of the screen is a small vignette of Brandy reading each letter as the story unfolds on the rest of the screen.
The tale is in a way intoxicating, it lures the reader in to Mark's world and his heartache for the girl. Great Ink!