10 minutes to make a wish

 

3:23am, 10 minutes before it’s time

A game I play with a friend

And wishing is not a crime

 

I don’t believe in wishes

Nor I do believe in signs

Yet lost I am tonight

Doubt is eating my mind

 

10 minutes to make a wish

10 minutes to ask for a sign

Cold is the flesh

Frozen seems the time

 

How ironic does my mind seem

Hope I need, even a beam

Three thirty three

That is not me

 

But lost I am and I need a clue

Other than wishing what can I do

I normally would do what ever I can

But too many options may kill a man

Author's Note

Some believe that 3:33 is the perfect time to make wishes !

Reviews

[trainwreck]

This was a very interesting little piece. I love the way you talked about the time and the way life has been going. Very well done!

[Red Raven]

You believe in it? why 3:33??? I like your style of writing. Thanks for sharing.:O)

[Nishant Gupta]

beautifully explained,nice efforts, read mine too " QUEST OF LIFE".

[Coyote Poetry]

Many myths with time. My daughter like to make wishes at 11.11. A interesting poem. I make wishes. Few have come true. Good to have hope. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Lily Mae]

Yes it is...the veil between heaven and earth is very thin at that time.. manifest good things...x

[Don Shaw]

I like it.Rhymes well.

[WritersSoul]

Very thoughtful and powering and i might actually make a wish then xD

[HeIsWe]

That's actual true in my family.

[Bloody_Stars]

Lol i found this funny! and its really good i love the rhymn.

[Caleb Pendleton]

The (the somewhat inconsistant) rhyming in this is kinda disyracting. Then again I guess I just really dislike rhyming even if everything else is fine :/