Betrayal

 Don’t call at night

That is when it hurts the most

Don’t call at night

That is when I get lost

 

Don’t call at night

That’s when I’m all alone

Don’t call me a knight

I’m but clay and stone

 

Don’t call my name

And his name don’t replace

I can’t bare a shame

If you remember his face

 

Don’t make me think

No not again

I’ll drown and you’ll sink

And all would go in vain

 

Keep it this way

Suspensions than dismay

I’ll die when comes a day

I try to betray

 

Don’t squeeze when we embrace

And keep a bit of grace

If I’m wrong, I don’t know

But if so let me go

 

Leave me for tomorrow

I’m not yours today

No guilt, shame or sorrow

Each on own way

 

With all respect

And don’t regret

Don’t forget  

The words you heard me say

 

Yet save me a sip of your wine

Even if not mine

Even if poisoned or cheep

That friendship I’ll try to keep

Reviews

[Yasmin]

I loved it!
a simple poem that is mixed with honest emotions. The beginning is good the end is better. The second and the final stanzas are just perfect. I loved the structure and the rhyme. I wouldn’t be surprised of such greatness as I once told u, u were born to write.
Waiting for more :)

[Calypso]

It seems at times we become distant to the ones we love and when we realize it we will do anything to talk to them again.

[Ruth]

Really interesting piece! A powerful poem love.....the turn around is superb! xx

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the poem. A lot of hidden tale in the words. Sometime we need quiet and peace after a let down of someone we care for. I like the repetition and the very strong ending. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote