Mortal remains

 

Whole again, I may never be

Not after last time we talked

I can’t longer feel alive

Hard it seems to be happy

 

Pure is my heart

Yet shattered on floor

And the devil inside awaits

Peaking, a half opened door

 

Of all the reasons that keep me awake

Through all lonesome nights

I find none…

None at the morning to wake me up

 

For all have forsaken my nights

Your laughter your sighs

Your insomnia

Abandoned all my sights

 

More sighs breaking silence

Is now all what I am

All what’s left of me

At least for today

 

Less joy and more dismay

And runs the blood in veins

Reviving my mortal remains

Awaits none to stay

 

Next to my mortal remain

To ease all the pain

That grows when they leave

And a blood stain on sleeve

 

After passing through my life

After leaving a mark of joy

All that remains

Memories and blood stains

Reviews

[A.r. Bazian]

Not Exactly The best poem you've written. The structure needs tweaking.

The thoughts though, as its been for a while, are breaching and strong!

work on it, it could be amazingly better

[YouoweYoupay]

This is heartbreaking, i could barely go on with the last lines...Hoping your coming winter will be filled with health, love, and beautiful fog, rain, and snow.

[Emotionally Blank yet F..]

I really like this. Like a lot :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A very strong poem. When disappointment overtake us. Death can look like a friend. I like the description and the ending. Last line could be a movie title. Outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Desert Dreamer]

It hurts when the one we love is gone...all we have is memories.

[Nobody.]

Interesting write...the phrasing seems slightly askew...but I think that's why I like it. gives an interesting choppy flow that matched the deeper emotions expressed. good stuff.

[A.A.Romanczuk]

The painful side of love...you have found the dark side of the moon, so to speak..so eloquently put...I feel it...I feel it...this is my Now...but we are strong...You have weathered worst things, my friends...this too, shall pass into the dust..