Natural disaster

Where the night slept in worry
And the heart bled inside
And the blood spilled on full moon
Came no one to my help

When the love died in fury
And the world seems pale 
Death falls on all dreams 
Running from myself

Where the hope that you bury
Lives inside your mind
Scars leaking all guilt
Only death can comfort you

Can you sing to the wind
As it worships your eyes

Waiting to touch your face
Swarming inside your heart

All the burden I carry
Disappears with your smile
Knowing I can't be with you
Sadness fills my breath

Author's Note

Reviews are welcome

Reviews

[Lisasview]

Love can be a disaster...but it can be a wonderful reward as well.
Interesting poem..
You said reviews were welcome and I always like being honest..
I wish there was punctuation...because I believe it will make your even more powerful.
Lisa, Now in Spain

[Cindy Marietta]

"Only death can comfort you"

Scary thought but true, I loved the tone of this poem!

[HungryGhost]

wow. 3anjad bezza3el (b6aree2a mnee7a) great job :)

[M.Kilani]

Thank you, yeah betza3ell bas sho benda ne3mal...

[HungryGhost]

andari

[TL Boehm]

the pain of missing someone is evident in this piece. Well done.

[M.Kilani]

Thank you.

[Michael (Letters and Li..]

Very good write. The imagery in here was amazing. I felt all of the emotion in her, especially the ending, which was perfect for this poem. Well done. :)

[M.Kilani]

Thank you, I'm glad you find it so, and I'm sorry that you've felt such emotions... didn't mean for other to feel that bad.
Thanks again.

[Saddam]

When the love died in fury
And the world seems pale
Death falls on all dreams
Running from myself.

Great one dear.....

[M.Kilani]

Thank you, I'm glad you like it.

[Sami Khalil]

I'm so glad I stumbled on your page to enjoy this wonderful write. There are natural disasters even in love. Excellent...:).................

[M.Kilani]

Thank you Sami, I'm glad you find the poem so, feel free to read more poems, it's a pleasure to have a review from you.
Mohammad.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)..........................

[Coyote Poetry]

A powerful and sad journey in your words. When something we hold precious is gone. Leave us with sadness and disappointment. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[M.Kilani]

Always a pleasure to read your reviews, I started to believe that you're the beating heart of Writer's Cafe, thank you for your kind words.
Mohammad.