Forsaken

Endless night
Endless light
Oh... how immaculate

Without your embrace
What a disgrace
A divine touch you can't replace

A dove and a hell hound
Whispering sound
Time to become your own solid ground

Try or die
Don't deny
A laughter followed by a sigh

Endless fight
Endless might
Oh... how accurate

No longer they matter
A goddess in your dreams
And a doll in the hand of another

And when joy is gone
you're back at where it begun
Missing warmth under the sun

Human parades
endless shades
time passes by as glory fades

Would you still stay
Or walk away
Today is tomorrow that we feared yesterday

Would you still wait?
Is time to curse fate?
Bury your ashes below your hate

No life to awaken
No gain to be taken
Once again, you are forsaken

Reviews

[Just Kim]

such a deep write and emotional.
This is rather wonderful really,
you made a powerful statement.
I think I just found my favorite poet here.
Enjoyed the read!

[M.Kilani]

Thank you, i'm really flattered, and I'm really glad you liked the poem.
Thanks again,
Mohammad.

[Coyote Poetry]

A sad but beautiful poem.
"Human parades
endless shades
time passes by as glory fades "
So many lines stood out. The above lines were my favorite. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[M.Kilani]

Thank you for the review, it's always a pleasure to read your reviews
Yes it's very sad when the world around you is spinning and your still at your place, you can outrun the devil but you can never outrun time, and it get harder when you're alone and forsaken.

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree. Send me read request directly. I love your poetry and thoughts.

[M.Kilani]

will do my friend.