Why can't i tell you??

Their is a girl that i am afraid to tell her that i might just love

Why can't i just tell you?? I liked you from the start We called each other friends But in our mind did we want to be more Yes yes we did you might be over me But do you think i can bring the feeling back? Maybe, maybe not but i'll try because i have to know I have to know if you might be the one The one that can change my world Change how I see reality and fantisy Could you make my fantasy reality So I wont have anymore dreams That i hope come true pleas just make it real Make it come true if a wish were offered to me It my wish would be to have you But why am i so shy to ask you this is unlike me This girl would mean the world to me if she was ever mine <3

Reviews

[Nancy S.]

I like the informality of the form, the forgoing of the use of a period, and the way it reads with the anxiety to which the narrator would experience it. A well captured moment of human frailty. well done, and welcome to the cafe.

[thoughts of jade]

its beautiful

[Jane Bryan]

Aw, this is amazing!